Writing • Page 49

Discussion in 'General Forum' started by WordsfromaSong, Apr 7, 2016.

  1. theagentcoma

    linktr.ee/jordansmith.author Prestigious

    Aaaaand now the rest is sent. It's out of my hands. Time to twiddle thumbs.
     
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  2. OotyPa

    fall away Supporter

    That is massive, man. Congrats! How do you feel about sharing book two with betas compared to book one?
     
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  3. theagentcoma

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    thanks! I feel much more confident and less clueless this time around. I was able to get one of my original betas back (a fellow indie author), one of my original ARC readers back, and a fellow indie author I respect. Last time I cast a wide net and got a bunch of randoms, but also two people I know, which is never the best idea.

    Word count is much higher this time (205k) so I gave them until July 1st, which is forever. Far too long for me to be not writing, so it's time to work on some other stuff.
     
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  4. OotyPa

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    So exciting. Did you share with my good friend Eric? I believe I connected you with him last time. I know he really enjoyed the first one.

    It’s inspiring to hear you’re still hard at work. It’s been hard for me to commit to returning to the page. I love when I take the time for my manuscript, but I have no cadence about it. It’s hard to convince myself to stick with it.
     
  5. theagentcoma

    linktr.ee/jordansmith.author Prestigious

    I did! And he is one of the betas so that's cool. I thank you for that connection.

    I honestly didn't think I'd go this hard. I was pretty burned out after book one, but then turned around and wrote 205k words in 4 months. Are you working on a new novel or poetry?
     
  6. additional_pylons

    basking in the glow Supporter

    I'm taking a big trip in about a month and I'm bringing a guitar. I have a lofty goal of writing a record while I'm out driving around the country. I'm wondering if there's anything in particular that ya'll find inspiring - a writer, a poet, a book you go back to, some (not super dense lol) philosophy, anything really. I've found that reading poetry can help, I'm bringing some stuff like Emily Dickinson and a copy of Letters to a Young Poet but I don't have much else. Has anything helped you?
     
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  7. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

  8. AP_Punk

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    Richard Shelton is a bit of a hidden gem when it comes to Southwest poetry. The Tattooed Desert is one of my favorite poetry books.
     
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  9. AP_Punk

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  10. OotyPa

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    hey sorry for missing this!

    that's a GREAT question! it's definitely leaning hybrid haha. I'm just totally going with the flow right now. it started as a more traditional multi-generation family POV novel, which has mutated into a nonlinear prose-poetry fiction experiment loosely based around the structure of a multi-generation novel. one of the characters is an author/poet--her section is the most fragmented and experimental. a lot of it, to me, seems to be about storytelling in an overarching way. still figuring it out myself haha, but also allowing it be a breeding ground for ideas. not trying to be rigid at all with this one
     
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  11. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

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  12. stonecoldnimrod Jun 3, 2026
    (Last edited: Jun 11, 2026)
    stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    -Abridged-

    My heart is a bridge
    No one appreciates
    Until it collapses

    The rubble now stained
    With both tears and rain
    The dust hasn’t settled
    And it never will

    It wasn’t until the ground shook
    That you looked
    In my direction
    Long after the kill

    My heart is a bridge
    No one appreciates
    Until it collapses
    My heart is a bridge
    That many have crossed
    And took for granted

    In many dark days
    I got in your way
    A light that flickered
    Not all hope was lost

    In return
    None lifted my curse
    Now older and sicker
    I’ve become unsound

    My heart is a bridge
    No one appreciates
    Until it collapses
    The skyline can be rebuilt
    But never replaced

    My heart was a bridge
    No one appreciated
    Until.
     
  13. G.A.S.

    G.A.S.

    i’m almost ready to release a rap/poetry/jazz album !! would luv ta collab with all the other writers maybe for future projects !!
     
  14. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    i set aside some monies to self publish about 100 copies of this book i've been workin on for over a decade. the hard part now is narrowing down 250 pieces to about 80.
     
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  15. additional_pylons

    basking in the glow Supporter

    reporting back on the tattooed desert. I love it

    was floored by

    “In one hand I carry your picture
    To guide me and with the other
    I am combing your name through my hair”

    and that’s from the first one in the book lmao
     
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  16. AP_Punk

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    That first poem also hooked me, haha. It just hits you with stunning, lyrical images.

    Awesome to hear you're enjoying Shelton's work!
     
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  17. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.