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Discussion in 'General Forum' started by WordsfromaSong, Apr 7, 2016.

  1. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

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  2. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    riot (unfinished)

    watch us light it up
    just to see the look on your faces
    as it’s burning down

    when they’re deaf to the protests
    and blind to the struggle
    their death bed will be made beneath the rubble

    some call it a riot
    oblivious that silence
    isn’t enough
    indifference, hide it
    behind due process, a science
    time to rise up

    this is who you voted for
    this is what you wanted
    this is what you represent
    this is how you flaunted
    this is you outside your door
    this is you unvarnished
    this is us, you misrepresent
    preach peace, practice carnage
     
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  3. OotyPa

    fall away Supporter

     
  4. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    -FROM THE LIGHT-

    the shine grows brighter
    yet i lay still
    is my fate inebriated
    or aiming for the kill?
    this pavement chills me
    thrills me alive
    as core memories are unearthed
    flashing before these eyes

    who will save me,
    save me from the light?
    who will save me,
    save me tonight?

    the luminescence playing tricks
    with my astigmatism
    it won't be until these eyes shut
    that i find true vision

    the shine encapsules
    yet i lay, still
    thought i was meant for so much more
    is there a way without a will?
    i can see myself against
    the half rusted chrome
    the break before the silence
    are numerous bones

    who will spare me,
    spare me from roadside?
    who will spare me,
    spare me from this fright?
    who will spare me?
    barely

    i long for the days to be warm again
    long before cremation
    but as a seed must die before it grows
    i seek recreation
    i long for the days to be whole again
    from self devastation
    but as i see the light, now i know
    my last destination

    the shine now fading
    and i lay still
    still

    who will save me,
    save me from the light?
    who will save me,
    save me from this fright?
    who will save me?
    save me.

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  5. Gnarly Charlie

    Good guy, but a bad dude

    Have been so fucking busy with work and home renovations, have not had time to write in quite awhile. But this is very cool :


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  6. theagentcoma

    linktr.ee/jordansmith.author Prestigious

    86 reviews, well done!!!
     
  7. Garrett

    this is an outrage Moderator

    been working on my second poetry collection more lately. this one is way more difficult than my first, which almost flowed out of me.
     
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  8. Garrett

    this is an outrage Moderator

    man, sharing a piece of writing is terrifying isn’t it
     
  9. OotyPa

    fall away Supporter

    It’s like a type of self-immolation. You stand there covered in flames waiting for others to notice
     
  10. theagentcoma

    linktr.ee/jordansmith.author Prestigious

    I know I've shared it probably at least 3 times in this thread but I've always loved this David Mitchell quote:

    "If you show someone something you’ve written, you give them a sharpened stake, lie down in your coffin, and say, ‘When you’re ready."
     
  11. stonecoldnimrod Jan 14, 2026
    (Last edited: Jan 21, 2026)
    stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    REMEDY

    i want to read your mind
    as if it were braille
    therefore, lets crack it open
    like a fortune cookie
    and discover the riches
    bountifully afforded

    curing poison
    with poison
    intravenously
    wills

    i want to change your mind
    with the snap of my fingers
    by using just one
    against the contour of a trigger

    rigot mortis
    then porous
    curiosity
    kills

    i want to blow your mind
    like lee harvey oswald
    did john f kennedy
    i want to show your kind
    that consequence isn't always swift
    but doesn't fail to remedy.


    -Life, After-
     
  12. stonecoldnimrod Jan 24, 2026
    (Last edited: Jan 26, 2026)
    stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

  13. theagentcoma

    linktr.ee/jordansmith.author Prestigious

    about halfway through draft two of Read Not the Runes

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  14. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

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  15. OotyPa

    fall away Supporter

    Probably my favorite of these predatory scam emails I've received yet. This one claims to be from a reclusive 76-year-old German author/playwright of classic gothic fiction.

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  16. Garrett

    this is an outrage Moderator

    One of my friends got one from “Suzanne Collins (yes, that one)” once. We joke about it all the time.
     
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  17. stonecoldnimrod Mar 11, 2026
    (Last edited: Mar 12, 2026)
    stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    SHO/CKW/AVE/S


    the shock, it comes in waves
    like water to earth, covers my brain
    too much to take in at once
    reverberating through all i ever was

    the shock, it comes and goes
    slithers through my pores, into my bones
    too many outcomes at play
    discombobulation fogging the way

    the shock, it comes in waves
    crashing into levees that keep me sane
    my ankles submerged in static
    and rising rapidly

    the shock, it still remains
    long after my optimism has frayed
    my head still above the electromagnetism
    against my better wisdom

    the shock, it comes in waves
    deaf to the sounds each make
    blind to the devastation i began
    dumb to the warnings that i now understand.
     
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  18. OotyPa

    fall away Supporter

     
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  19. AP_Punk

    Regular Supporter

    I work on a regional history podcast series and we're gearing up for a new season. I mixed and produced this audio trailer (as well as co-wrote and co-narrated it), which was a first for me. Just wanted to share somewhere with yall: The Magic City of the Southwest season two trailer

    Here's a new essay I wrote for my local alt-weekly: War and Peace in Three Songs

    And I have an ongoing series on Substack where I've been chronicling my journey of listening to records I've owned for years but haven't found time to listen to, until now. Here's the first installment.
     
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  20. OwainGlyndwr

    I am the Aleutian allusion illusion Supporter

    That was a really cool piece on Acrid, thanks for sharing it. I have really no interest in the genre as a whole haha, but it was fascinating to read about your experience with it.
     
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  21. I'm looking to design, format, produce, and print a literary magazine for my 12th grade creative writing class. Any standout companies that anyone's worked with here? I'm looking for something simple, clean, and affordable for my school.
     
  22. OotyPa

    fall away Supporter

    Curious what you mean by company--are you talking about design, or different publications to use as an example?
     
  23. Just an all-around printing service where I can upload the files/content to, but then on their website/app, the students can design the cover, choose typeset, create the table of contents, etc. And then after print and ship en masse.
     
  24. stonecoldnimrod

    roamer. wanderer. nomad. vagabond.

    -(-1)-

    the documentary on hbo max about jehovah’s witnesses was eye opening.
     
  25. theagentcoma

    linktr.ee/jordansmith.author Prestigious

    just sent the first half of book 2 to beta readers so that's scary
     
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